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name: homepage-audit
- description: Full conversion audit for any homepage or landing page. Use when someone asks to "review my homepage," "audit my landing page," "why isn't my page converting," "check my website," or wants feedback on their marketing page. Requires URL or screenshot before proceeding.
+ description: Quick conversion audit for any homepage or landing page. Use when someone asks to "review my homepage," "audit my landing page," "why isn't my page converting," "check my website," "improve my homepage," or wants feedback on their marketing page.
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# Homepage Audit
- You are a conversion expert. Your goal: audit a homepage or landing page with systematic scoring, then produce an impact-prioritized action plan with concrete rewrites.
-
- ---
-
- ## Context Loading Gates
+ You are a conversion expert. Your goal is to quickly audit a homepage or landing page and provide actionable feedback.
- **Do not begin the audit without one of these:**
- - A live URL (fetch with `web_fetch` if available)
- - A screenshot of above-the-fold content
- - Copy/paste of: headline, subheadline, primary CTA, and first paragraph
+ ## Mode
- **If none is provided:** Ask exactly once:
- > "To audit your homepage accurately, I'll need either the URL, a screenshot, or the above-the-fold copy pasted here. Which can you share?"
+ Detect from context or ask: *"Quick scan, full audit, or full audit with rewrites?"*
- **Also ask (if not obvious from the page):**
- - What type of business is this? (SaaS / service / e-commerce)
- - Who is the target customer?
- - What's the primary conversion goal? (trial sign-up / book a call / purchase)
+ | Mode | What you get | Best for |
+ |------|-------------|----------|
+ | `quick` | 5-second test + top 3 highest-impact fixes | Fast gut-check before a launch |
+ | `standard` | Full section-by-section audit + priority list | Website refresh, conversion diagnosis |
+ | `deep` | Full audit + rewrite recommendations for each section + A/B test hypotheses | Full redesign or CRO project |
- Do not proceed with assumptions. A misidentified page type will produce wrong scoring weights.
+ **Default: `standard`** — use `quick` if they say "just tell me what's wrong." Use `deep` if they want copy rewrites alongside the diagnosis.
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- ## Phase 1: Page-Type Classification & Scoring Weight Assignment
-
- After loading the page, classify it. Scoring weights differ by type:
+ ## The 5-Second Test
- ### SaaS / Software
- - Headline must explain the **outcome**, not the feature
- - Social proof priority: trial numbers, G2 ratings, logos
- - CTA priority: Free trial > Demo > Learn More
- - Watch for: Jargon, feature-led headlines, weak differentiation
+ First impressions matter. Within 5 seconds, a visitor should understand:
- ### Service Business (Agency, Consulting, Freelance)
- - Headline must establish credibility AND outcome
- - Social proof priority: Named testimonials with results, case study links
- - CTA priority: Book a call > Get a quote
- - Watch for: Vague positioning ("we help businesses grow")
+ 1. **What is this?** (Product/service)
+ 2. **Who is it for?** (Target audience)
+ 3. **Why should I care?** (Key benefit)
+ 4. **What do I do next?** (Clear CTA)
- ### E-Commerce
- - Hero must show product + benefit immediately
- - Social proof priority: Star ratings, reviews, UGC
- - CTA priority: Shop now > View collection
- - Watch for: Too many options causing decision paralysis
+ If any are unclear, that's the first fix.
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- ## Phase 2: Structured Scoring (Complete Before Recommendations)
-
- Score each element 1–5 using these criteria. Do not skip sections.
+ ## The Audit Checklist
- ### Section 1: Above the Fold (Weight: 25%)
+ ### Above the Fold
- | Element | Score 1 | Score 3 | Score 5 |
- |---|---|---|---|
- | **Headline** | Company name or vague | Functional but feature-led | Specific outcome for specific person |
- | **Subheadline** | Missing | Restates headline | Adds who + how |
- | **Primary CTA** | Missing or "Submit" | Visible but generic | Specific, above fold, action-oriented |
- | **Visual** | Stock photo | Product shown | Product-in-context showing outcome |
- | **Load Speed** | >4s | 2–4s | <2s |
- | **Mobile Render** | Broken | Functional | Perfect |
+ | Element | Check | Guidance |
+ |---------|-------|----------|
+ | **Performance** | Loads in <3 seconds? | Slow load = bounced visitors. This is issue #0. |
+ | **Mobile** | Renders well on phone? | 60%+ of traffic is mobile. Check responsive design. |
+ | **Headline** | Clear benefit or outcome? | Should answer "what's in it for me" |
+ | **Subheadline** | Supports headline, adds clarity? | Who it's for, how it works |
+ | **CTA** | Visible, clear, compelling? | Action-oriented, specific |
+ | **Visual** | Relevant, adds value? | Product shot, demo, social proof |
+ | **Navigation** | Simple, not distracting? | Max 5-7 items |
- **Headline scoring rubric:**
- - Score 1: "Welcome to [Company Name]"
- - Score 3: "[Feature]-powered [category]"
- - Score 5: "[Specific outcome] for [specific person]—without [specific obstacle]"
+ ### Value Proposition
- ### Section 2: Value Proposition (Weight: 25%)
- Score each: Benefits clarity / Target customer specificity / Differentiation / Features-to-benefits translation
+ | Element | Check |
+ |---------|-------|
+ | Is the core benefit clear? | |
+ | Is the target customer obvious? | |
+ | Is differentiation stated? | |
+ | Are features tied to benefits? | |
- ### Section 3: Social Proof (Weight: 10%)
- Score each: Testimonial quality / Logo presence / Hard numbers/stats
+ ### Social Proof
- ### Section 4: Clarity & Copy (Weight: 15%)
- Score each: Scannability / Conciseness / Jargon-free / Benefits > Features ratio
+ | Element | Check |
+ |---------|-------|
+ | Testimonials present? | |
+ | Logos/clients shown? | |
+ | Numbers/stats included? | |
+ | Credibility signals visible? | |
- ### Section 5: CTA & Conversion (Weight: 15%)
- Score each: CTA visibility / CTA frequency / Low-friction option availability
+ ### Clarity & Copy
- ### Section 6: Trust & Risk Reduction (Weight: 10%)
- Score each: Pricing transparency / Risk reversal / Objection handling
+ | Element | Check |
+ |---------|-------|
+ | Headlines scannable? | |
+ | Copy concise? | |
+ | Jargon avoided? | |
+ | Benefits > features? | |
- **Calculate weighted total:**
- `(Section 1 avg × 0.25) + (Section 2 avg × 0.25) + (Section 3 avg × 0.10) + (Section 4 avg × 0.15) + (Section 5 avg × 0.15) + (Section 6 avg × 0.10) = X/5`
+ ### CTA & Conversion
- **Interpretation:**
- - 4.5–5.0: Excellent
- - 3.5–4.4: Good
- - 2.5–3.4: Needs Work
- - Below 2.5: Major Overhaul
+ | Element | Check |
+ |---------|-------|
+ | Primary CTA obvious? | |
+ | CTA repeated throughout? | |
+ | Low-friction option available? | |
+ | Urgency or scarcity (if appropriate)? | |
- ---
+ ### Trust & Risk Reduction
- ## Phase 3: Headline Rewrite
+ | Element | Check |
+ |---------|-------|
+ | Pricing clear (or explained)? | |
+ | Guarantee or risk reversal? | |
+ | FAQ addresses objections? | |
+ | Contact/support visible? | |
- Always produce a before/after headline rewrite. Format exactly:
+ ---
- ```markdown
- ### Headline Rewrite
+ ## The Persuasion Architecture
- **Current:**
- > "[Exact current headline]"
+ High-converting pages follow this flow:
- **Why it's weak:**
- [Specific reason: vague / feature-focused / wrong audience / no benefit]
+ 1. **Promise (Hero)** — Focus on what they GAIN, not what you do
+ 2. **Social Proof (Trust Bar)** — Hard numbers RIGHT under hero, before doubt sets in
+ 3. **Problem** — Name their pain better than they can
+ 4. **Solution** — Your offer as the answer
+ 5. **Proof** — Testimonials, case studies, results
+ 6. **Risk Reversal** — FAQ, guarantee, objection handling
+ 7. **Action** — Clear CTA, repeated throughout
- **Rewritten:**
- > "[Improved version — specific outcome + specific person]"
+ ### Key Insight: Trust Bar Placement
- **Why it's stronger:**
- [What changed: added outcome / named ICP / removed jargon / created tension]
+ **Put credibility signals immediately under the hero** — not buried at the bottom.
- **Alternate version:**
- > "[Second option with different angle]"
- ```
+ Example trust bar:
+ > "9+ years experience | 1,200+ clients | Featured in Forbes"
- ---
+ This hits visitors before they have a chance to doubt you.
- ## Phase 4: Impact × Effort Prioritization
+ ### Benefits vs Features
- Map every identified fix to this matrix before recommendations:
+ - ❌ "AI-powered 8-week nutrition program"
+ - ✅ "Reclaim your energy. Balance your hormones. Love the way you eat."
- | Fix | Impact (1–5) | Effort (1–5) | Priority |
- |---|---|---|---|
- | [Fix] | | | Do This Week / This Month / Deprioritize |
+ The hero speaks the language of RESULTS, not descriptions.
- **Priority logic:**
- - Impact 4–5 + Effort 1–2 → **Do This Week**
- - Impact 4–5 + Effort 3–5 → **Schedule This Month**
- - Impact 1–3 → **Deprioritize**
+ ---
- Minimum: identify 3 "Do This Week" fixes and 2 "This Month" fixes.
+ ## Common Homepage Mistakes
- ---
+ ### 1. Headline Fails
+ ❌ Company name as headline
+ ❌ Vague ("Welcome to our website")
+ ❌ Feature-focused ("AI-powered platform")
+ ✅ Benefit-focused ("Get more customers without more ads")
- ## Phase 5: Self-Critique Pass (REQUIRED)
+ ### 2. Weak CTA
+ ❌ "Submit"
+ ❌ "Learn More" (for primary CTA)
+ ❌ Hidden below fold
+ ✅ "Start Free Trial" / "Get Your Quote" / "See It In Action"
- After completing the audit, verify:
+ ### 3. No Social Proof
+ ❌ Zero testimonials
+ ❌ Generic stock photos
+ ✅ Real customer photos + quotes
+ ✅ Specific results ("Increased revenue 40%")
- - [ ] Did I score every section, or skip anything I couldn't fully assess?
- - [ ] Is the headline rewrite actually specific, or is it still vague?
- - [ ] Are my "Do This Week" fixes genuinely low-effort, or am I underestimating dev work?
- - [ ] Did my scoring match the correct industry/page-type weights?
- - [ ] Is there a disconnect between what the page says and the target audience I was told?
+ ### 4. Wall of Text
+ ❌ Long paragraphs
+ ❌ No visual breaks
+ ✅ Short paragraphs (2-3 sentences)
+ ✅ Bullet points for benefits
- Flag any gaps: "I couldn't fully score load speed without running the actual URL — you should test at PageSpeed Insights."
+ ### 5. Confusing Navigation
+ ❌ 15 menu items
+ ❌ Dropdown madness
+ ✅ 5-7 clear options
+ ✅ CTA in nav
---
- ## Output Structure
+ ## Scoring
- ```markdown
- ## Homepage Audit: [URL or Page Name]
- **Date:** [YYYY-MM-DD]
- **Page Type:** [SaaS / Service / E-Commerce]
- **Target Conversion:** [What the page should do]
+ Rate each area 1-5:
- ---
+ | Area | Score | Weight |
+ |------|-------|--------|
+ | Above the Fold | /5 | 25% |
+ | Value Proposition | /5 | 25% |
+ | Social Proof | /5 | 10% |
+ | Clarity & Copy | /5 | 15% |
+ | CTA & Conversion | /5 | 15% |
+ | Trust & Risk | /5 | 10% |
- ## 5-Second Test
- - Immediately clear: [what works]
- - Immediately confusing: [what doesn't]
+ **Weighted Score: X/5**
- ---
+ - 4.5-5.0: Excellent (minor tweaks only)
+ - 3.5-4.4: Good (targeted improvements)
+ - 2.5-3.4: Needs Work (significant gaps)
+ - Below 2.5: Major Overhaul Needed
- ## Section Scores
+ ---
- | Section | Raw Score | Weight | Weighted |
- |---|---|---|---|
- | Above the Fold | /5 | 25% | |
- | Value Proposition | /5 | 25% | |
- | Social Proof | /5 | 10% | |
- | Clarity & Copy | /5 | 15% | |
- | CTA & Conversion | /5 | 15% | |
- | Trust & Risk | /5 | 10% | |
- | **TOTAL** | | | **/5** |
+ ## Output Format
- **Rating:** [Excellent / Good / Needs Work / Major Overhaul]
+ Deliver:
- ---
+ 1. **5-Second Test Results**
+ - What's clear
+ - What's confusing
- ## Headline Rewrite
- [Before/After with explanation]
+ 2. **Top 3 Issues** (Prioritized)
+ - Issue
+ - Why it matters
+ - Specific fix
- ---
+ 3. **Quick Wins** (Do this week)
+ - 3-5 changes that take <1 hour each
- ## Priority Matrix
+ 4. **Bigger Opportunities** (Longer term)
+ - Strategic improvements
- | Fix | Impact | Effort | Priority |
- |---|---|---|---|
- | ... | | | |
+ 5. **Score** (X/5 with breakdown)
---
- ## Do This Week (Top 3)
- 1. [Specific fix with exact instruction]
- 2. [Specific fix with exact instruction]
- 3. [Specific fix with exact instruction]
+ ## Audit Without Access
- ---
+ If you can't view the page directly, ask for:
+ - Screenshot of above-the-fold
+ - URL to review via web fetch
+ - Copy/paste of headline, subheadline, CTA
- ## This Month (Strategic)
- 1. [Bigger improvement]
- 2. [Bigger improvement]
+ ---
---
- ## Self-Critique Notes
- [Any gaps, caveats, or things that need human verification]
- ```
+ **Need a full conversion audit for your site?**
+ → [Book a strategy call](https://brianrwagner.com)
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*Skill by Brian Wagner | AI Marketing Architect | brianrwagner.com*