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name: kallaway-layered-hook
- description: Use when writing, rewriting or reviewing the opening seconds of a short-form video (Reel, TikTok, YouTube Short, LinkedIn video), a video script opening, or a storyboard's first frames. Builds an aligned visual, text, spoken (and audio) hook on one idea, picks a proven hook format, and checks the payoff into the body.
+ description: "Write, rewrite, or review short-form video openings using Kallaway's visual-first layered hook method; use for scripts and first-frame storyboards that need clear topic, aligned text and speech, credible contrast, and an immediate payoff."
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# Kallaway Layered Hook
Based on Kallaway's public method. Not affiliated with or endorsed by Kallaway.
- A hook has one job: make the right viewer opt in. It needs topic clarity and on-target curiosity, and curiosity comes from contrast [7][1]. Every hook has layers: what you show (visual), what you write on screen (text), what you say (spoken), plus the audio/sound effects [1][2]. The difference he names between 500 and 500,000 views is maximum alignment between those layers on ONE idea [1].
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- ## Core model (internalise before writing)
+ Produce a filmable hook storyboard that makes the intended viewer understand the topic and want the next beat. Build the opening around one key visual, then align the overlay, spoken words, and sound around the same idea. Curiosity comes from the gap between the viewer's expected reality and the alternative the video can actually demonstrate. [S1][S3]
- 1. **Curiosity loop through contrast.** The viewer believes A; the hook shows B. The distance between A and B is the contrast; bigger contrast, deeper hook. You have about 5 seconds to make it stick [1].
- 2. **Viewers read the screen before they hear you.** Order of intake is visual, then audio, then back to the visual to confirm what they heard ("visual, audio, visual" sandwich) [1]. Eyes take in far more per second than ears [1][3]. So the spoken hook is the least important of the three layers [3]; text and visual carry the stop. (He ranks text above visual in one post [2] and visual above all in others [1][3]; both agree spoken comes last. Treat text + visual as one unit that must work with sound off.)
- 3. **Misalignment = comprehension loss = bounce.** If the spoken line says something the visual does not show, the viewer gets confused and leaves [2][1]. Even a slightly different visual weakens the hook [1].
- 4. **Spend disproportionate effort on the opening.** Hooks are the "80 of the 80/20" [1][7]; he recommends ~80% of effort on the opening [11].
+ ## When to use
- ## Method (run in this order)
+ Use for the opening seconds of a Reel, TikTok, YouTube Short, LinkedIn video, short-form script, or first-frame storyboard. Apply the same loop when diagnosing an existing opening. Keep the user's audience, voice, format, and available footage as constraints. If the request covers only a hook, include enough of the next beat to demonstrate its payoff without expanding into a complete video production.
- 1. **Find the key visual first.** Before writing words, list the visuals you can put in the first 3 to 5 seconds. The better the visual, the more you lean on it. If there is no good visual, either manufacture one (motion graphics, stock) or seriously consider not making the video [1].
- 2. **Mine the biggest contrast.** List the most interesting facts or angles; score how surprising each is (he uses a 1 to 100 shock score) and keep the ones most viewers do not know [8]. The fact with the biggest contrast decides the format [1].
- 3. **Pick one hook format that both maximises contrast and matches the key visual** [1]. Any topic can be framed in any format, so choose by fit to the visual, not habit [1]. His six archetypes [1]:
- - **Fortune Teller**: present vs future. Establish current reality, show how the future changes, tease it ("This is the future of home design"). Good for launches, news, innovation [1][4].
- - **Experimenter**: peer-to-peer demo. Base pain point, show you tried a new method/tool, show why it is better. Good for product demos and B2B tools; best when the product itself is on screen in the hook [1].
- - **Teacher**: teacher-to-student lesson. Pain point, method/learnings, why it works. Builds authority [1].
- - **Magician**: a visual or verbal stun gun ("check this out", snap, wig reveal, rapid match cut) or a "visual pacifier" (passive activity on screen). Stack it in front of any other format [1].
- - **Investigator**: a secret or finding the viewer does not know; frame against their current not-knowing [1].
- - **Contrarian**: state outright what you believe that most people do not ("you're doing X wrong") [1][4].
- Short alternate set from his IG: Fortune Teller, Contrarian, Insider, Proven Winner (lead with a result that validates the claim), Eye Magnet, Connector (link two things that do not normally go together) [4]. A longer set of nine formats (Secret Reveal, Case Study, Comparison, Question, Education, List, Contrarian, Personal Experience, Problem) appears in his scripting video [8]. To choose, check which one or two formats win in your niche via outlier videos [8].
- 4. **Write the spoken hook: 2 to 4 lines** [1] using the three beats [6][9]:
- - **Context lean** (1 to 2 sentences): state the topic plainly so wrong viewers exit and right viewers lean in, via common ground, a benefit/pain point, a simplifying metaphor, or a mind-blowing fact [6][9]. When showing the key visual, literally describe what is on screen ("These are life-size floor plans...") for pure alignment [1].
- - **Scroll-stop interjection** (1 sentence): a contrast connector (but, however, yet) that stuns [6][9].
- - **Contrarian snapback** (1 sentence): snap the viewer the opposite way of the lean, still on topic [6][9]. Skip the explicit interjection if the visual is already contrast enough [1].
- 5. **Check the words carry the power-word slots**: Subject clarity word, Action word, Objective/state-change word, Contrast word (the most important, compares outcome vs base state). Two more optional slots raise intrigue [5]; per a secondary write-up they are Proof and Time [10].
- 6. **Write the on-screen text hook** to support the key visual and to re-confirm it after the viewer hears the speech [1]. It is larger overlay text, not captions [11]. Prefer a promise/category over an unfamiliar term: the 15M-view floor-plans video used "future of home design" plus an arrow pointing to the key visual [1][9].
- 7. **Visual motion**: just enough motion. Too much overwhelms, too little bores [6]. Visual hook families: graphic and text overlays, pattern interrupts, subject motion, visual effects, unique visual selection [3].
- 8. **Watch it back with sound off, then on.** Ask: going visual, speech, visual, is the viewer clear what this is about, and does it match where the rest of the video goes? If not, stop and rework the hook; if no clear aligned hook exists, can the idea [1].
- 9. **Pay it off immediately.** Deliver the first hit of value right after the hook, not buried later [6]. Never open a loop with nothing at the end [9].
+ The default deliverable is a timed storyboard plus its contrast, sound-off interpretation, first payoff, and review status. For a review request, return the diagnosis and a concrete revised opening in that structure. Read the method for decisions, the examples for calibration, and the checklist before delivering. This package adapts public teaching into an agent workflow; source summaries and editorial extensions are identified in the reference files.
- ## Self-review checks (run before returning output)
+ ## Procedure
- - [ ] One idea: visual, text, spoken (and audio) all say the same thing; nothing in speech the picture does not show [1][2].
- - [ ] Sound-off test: the frame + on-screen text alone tell the viewer the topic [1][2].
- - [ ] Topic is clear within the first 1 to 2 seconds; no throat-clearing ("guys, this is crazy...") [7].
- - [ ] Clarity: fewer words, simpler words, active voice, about 6th-grade reading level; read it in isolation and confirm only one interpretation [7][9].
- - [ ] Relevance: framed as "you/your" unless the "I" result is itself the hook; framed as a need-to-have pain point, not a nice-to-have [7][9].
- - [ ] Contrast present: A (common belief/status quo) vs B (faster, better, cheaper). Use stated contrast unless the audience's baseline is certain [7][9].
- - [ ] Format named and it is the one that best fits the key visual [1].
- - [ ] Spoken hook is 2 to 4 short lines; short, staccato sentences at the start [1][6].
- - [ ] Subject, Action, Objective, Contrast words all present [5].
- - [ ] Hook checks: Alignment [1], Speed to value [6], Clarity [8], Curiosity through contrast [1].
- - [ ] Next beat pays off the promise directly [6][9].
+ 1. **Establish the brief.** Identify the intended viewer, their relevant problem or interest, the video's actual takeaway, and available footage. Use the brief fields in [templates/output-template.md](templates/output-template.md). Ask only for information that materially changes the opening; mark reasonable assumptions instead of inventing evidence.
- ## Failure modes to avoid
+ 2. **Inspect the existing hook when present.** Locate delay, confusion, irrelevance, and disinterest before polishing individual words. Use the diagnostic in [references/method.md](references/method.md#diagnosis-and-explicit-warnings). Preserve any effective visual or claim rather than replacing everything automatically. [S3]
- - **Abstract key phrase with no showable visual.** His own sub-100K example: "future of storytelling" over floating rooms plus jargon ("generative world model") caused comprehension loss; the fix was something concrete and showable, or cutting the idea [1].
- - **Spoken hook contradicts or drifts from the visual** [2].
- - **Polishing the spoken line while ignoring the visual stun** [3].
- - **Delay**: topic arrives late, vague suspense [7].
- - **Confusion**: convoluted sentence, passive voice, jargon [7].
- - **Irrelevance**: "I" framing that makes viewers decide if they identify with you [7].
- - **Disinterest**: clear and relevant but no contrast [7].
- - **Trick hooks** that pull the wrong audience, and **empty snapbacks** with no payoff [9].
- - **Unfamiliar idea with no anchor**: "cult hop" by wrapping it in a known reference (brand, celebrity) [6].
- - **Using AI to invent hooks from a blank prompt**; he uses AI to rewrite for clarity at a 6th-grade level, keeping the meaning [7][9].
+ 3. **Inventory opening visuals.** List shots that can carry the first three to five seconds. Choose the most concrete, readable demonstration. If none exists, propose a specific achievable visual or explain the blocker. Follow [references/method.md](references/method.md#visual-first-selection). [S1]
- ## Worked examples (illustrative, written for this skill, not Kallaway's)
+ 4. **Select a credible contrast.** Write A, the viewer's baseline, and B, the new reality. Compare candidate angles for surprise, relevance, visual fit, and support. Prefer stated contrast when the audience's baseline is uncertain. Use [references/method.md](references/method.md#contrast-and-relevance). [S1][S3][S4]
- **1. SaaS feature launch (Fortune Teller + Magician)**
- - Before: Spoken "Hey everyone, we're super excited to share our new AI update that leverages agents to streamline workflows." Text: "BIG NEWS". Visual: logo animation.
- - Problems: delay, jargon, logo shows nothing, text says nothing, no contrast.
- - After: Visual: screen recording, a 40-row spreadsheet filling itself in under 3 s. Text: "Spreadsheets that fill themselves" + arrow at the filling column. Spoken: "Check this out. This spreadsheet is filling itself in. You paste a list of companies and it researches every row. Most teams still do this by hand for hours."
+ 5. **Choose the hook format.** Select the archetype that best expresses that contrast through the chosen shot. Add a Magician treatment only when it helps direct attention. Consult the format table in [references/method.md](references/method.md#hook-formats); the examples show two different choices. [S1]
- **2. Coaching tip (Contrarian)**
- - Before: Spoken "I've been thinking a lot about productivity lately." Visual: talking head. Text: none.
- - After: Visual: hand dragging a to-do list into the trash. Text: "Stop writing to-do lists". Spoken: "If you write a to-do list every morning, you're probably getting less done. Most people think the list is the plan. But the list is the problem."
+ 6. **Draft the spoken opening.** Write two to four short lines that establish context, redirect expectation, and reveal the alternative. Describe the visible subject plainly. Skip a redundant contrast connector when the visual already supplies the reversal. Follow [references/method.md](references/method.md#spoken-hook-and-word-audit). [S1][S2]
- **3. Product demo (Experimenter, stated contrast)**
- - Before: Text "Our editor is fast". Spoken "Our video editor has many features."
- - After: Visual: split screen, left timeline being hand-cut, right one cut automatically, timer on both. Text: "4 hours vs 4 minutes". Spoken: "You're editing podcast clips by hand. I gave the same episode to this tool. It cut 10 clips before I finished my first."
+ 7. **Audit the wording.** Locate subject, action, outcome, and contrast; add proof or time only when useful and supported. Simplify jargon and ambiguity without changing the claim. See [references/method.md](references/method.md#spoken-hook-and-word-audit) for the secondary-source status of this audit. [S3][S5]
- ## Output format: hook storyboard
+ 8. **Compose the other layers.** Write a short overlay that identifies the topic or promise, choose legible placement, and specify purposeful motion and optional sound. Check that all layers reinforce one proposition. Use [references/method.md](references/method.md#layer-alignment) and the timeline fields in [templates/output-template.md](templates/output-template.md). [S1][S2]
- ```
- FORMAT: <archetype> (+ Magician if stacked) CONTRAST: A = <belief> -> B = <new reality>
- KEY VISUAL: <the one shot the hook is built around>
+ 9. **Time the storyboard and payoff.** Read the speech aloud or estimate conservatively. Let topic clarity arrive early; extend the timeline instead of forcing four sentences into three seconds. Specify the first demonstration after the hook. Follow [templates/output-template.md](templates/output-template.md) and [examples/worked-examples.md](examples/worked-examples.md). [S2][S3]
- 0.0-1.0s VISUAL: <shot, motion, framing> TEXT: <overlay, position, arrow/target>
- SPOKEN: <line 1, context lean> AUDIO: <sfx/music cue>
- 1.0-2.0s VISUAL: ... TEXT: ... SPOKEN: <interjection or continuation>
- 2.0-3.0s VISUAL: ... TEXT: ... SPOKEN: <snapback / promise>
+ 10. **Review and repair.** Run the sound-off and sound-on passes in [checklists/review-checklist.md](checklists/review-checklist.md). If footage is unavailable, label the result a storyboard review. Repair failures at their cause, then repeat the affected checks; do not approve an opening whose promise the body cannot fulfill. [S1][S2]
- SOUND-OFF READ: <what a muted viewer understands from frame + text>
- NEXT BEATS:
- Beat 1 (3-6s): <first payoff of the promise, what is shown>
- Beat 2 (6-10s): <next contrast / re-hook>
- CHECKS: alignment Y/N | sound-off Y/N | topic by 2s Y/N | contrast Y/N | S-A-O-C words Y/N | payoff Y/N
- ```
+ 11. **Return the usable result.** Fill [templates/output-template.md](templates/output-template.md), including rationale, assumptions, and any unresolved production requirement. Keep source attribution consistent with [references/sources.md](references/sources.md). Return the strongest candidate unless the user requests alternatives; never imply guaranteed views or measured retention from a writing review.
- ## Sources
+ ## Files in this skill
- 1. Kallaway, "I Studied 100 Viral Hooks, These 6 Will Make You Go Viral" (YouTube xnOe8aA9Pmw), transcript: https://you-tldr.com/transcript/xnOe8aA9Pmw (video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xnOe8aA9Pmw)
- 2. Kallaway IG, "Hook Alignment": https://www.instagram.com/reel/DbyRmzAu81r/
- 3. Kallaway IG, "Visual Stun Gun": https://www.instagram.com/reel/DbA5ScOOYDl/
- 4. Kallaway IG, "these 6 hook formats always outperform": https://www.instagram.com/reel/Das2r1lOB0B/
- 5. Kallaway IG, "6 Hook Power Words": https://www.instagram.com/reel/DbQgNloOigA/
- 6. Summary + description of "How to Create Irresistible Hooks" (LmXpbP7dD48): https://videohighlight.com/v/LmXpbP7dD48
- 7. Summary of "Give me 15 mins, and I'll make your hooks impossible to skip" (2byPP_9F0-Q): https://videohighlight.com/v/2byPP_9F0-Q
- 8. Summary of "How to Script Viral Videos 10x Faster" (_Z11mjFh2zY): https://videohighlight.com/v/_Z11mjFh2zY
- 9. Secondary analysis of [6] and [7] with quotes: https://build-os.com/blogs/source-analyses/kallaway-irresistible-hooks
- 10. Secondary analysis of "The ONLY 6 Words You Need to Hook ANY Viewer": https://build-os.com/blogs/source-analyses/kallaway-6-words-hook
- 11. Creator Spotlight profile (six ingredients, hook layers, 80% effort): https://www.creatorspotlight.com/p/kallaway
- 12. Kallaway's 7-day course outline (Day 3 = hook framework): https://shortformsystem.co
+ - [SKILL.md](SKILL.md): Entry point, use cases, and the agent's working loop.
+ - [references/method.md](references/method.md): Detailed principles, format selection, warnings, and edge cases.
+ - [references/sources.md](references/sources.md): Fetched public sources, contribution notes, and evidence limitations.
+ - [examples/worked-examples.md](examples/worked-examples.md): Invented before-and-after storyboards with rule explanations.
+ - [templates/output-template.md](templates/output-template.md): Fill-in hook storyboard with field guidance.
+ - [checklists/review-checklist.md](checklists/review-checklist.md): Pass/fail review and common repairs.