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vividness from kalyvask/winning-writing is an agent skill: a SKILL.md folder an AI agent loads when a task calls for it.

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SKILL.md skill
Repository
kalyvask/winning-writing
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side-panel-coach/rules/skills/vividness/SKILL.md
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git:20260522.8896ed6, committed May 22, 2026
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License
MIT

Pushes a draft from abstract toward concrete at two scales. Noun-level (replaces "dog" with "German shepherd," "customer" with "Sarah at JPMorgan's options-trading desk," "many" with "47 of 100") and scene-level (turns "I was angry" into the body signal, room, and dialogue). Implements Kramon's "specific over abstract" rule, Kristof's "real names, real numbers, real interviews," and Lauren Weinstein's "could a director recreate this scene?" test. Use when a draft is technically correct but…

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What the file says

# Vividness

Source: `points/core-rules.md` rule 2 (know your audience), Kramon's rule that **stories are 12× more memorable than statistics alone**, Lauren Weinstein's guest lecture in Glenn Kramon's *Winning Writing* (GSB, Spring 2026).

## What this skill does

Two modes behind one skill. Both push abstract → concrete; they operate at different scales:

| Mode | Replaces | Use when |
|---|---|---|
| **noun-level** | "dog" → "German shepherd," "customer" → "Sarah at JPMorgan," "many" → "47 of 100" | Draft has category nouns the reader has to fill in |
| **scene-level** | "I was angry" → body signal + room + dialogue + moment | Story is technically correct but flat |

Default `--mode both` runs noun-level first (fixes generic words), then scene-level (turns key moments into scenes). The order matters: noun replacements provide the concrete material a scene needs.

## How to invoke

```
/vividness "draft text"
/vividness --mode noun-level "draft text"
/vividness --mode scene-level "draft text"
/vividness --mode both "draft text"
```

Without `--mode`, default to `both`.

## A note on examples
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How to install

The exact contents, by fingerprint
mdr add kalyvask/winning-writing/vividness@sha256:eda8f100685ec050

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  • pass: No zero-width or bidi control characters
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Source

GitHub

kalyvask/winning-writing · 16 stars · license MIT · pushed 2026-09-05 · branch main

API

GET https://markdownregistry.com/api/v1/artifacts/art_5esspbfzvfaou6aw
GET https://markdownregistry.com/api/v1/resolve?ref=kalyvask/winning-writing/vividness
GET https://markdownregistry.com/api/v1/blob/eda8f100685ec0505546fa0ddac918211c44a7d82b75c13ac77e8a1496709768

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